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Seven Herbs of Autumn (aki no nanakusa)
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: Early Autumn
***** Category: Plants / Humanity
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Explanation
Kaii Otsuki no hara 甲斐大月の原
Utagawa Hiroshige 歌川広重
The seven flowers of autumn, aki no nanakusa
秋の七草
Flowers blossoming
in autumn fields -
when I count them on my fingers
they then number seven.
The flowers of bush clover,
eulalia, arrowroot,
pink, patrinia,
also, mistflower
and morning faces flower.
aki no no ni
sakitaru hana o
yubi orite
kaki kazoureba
nana kusa no hana
hagi ga hana
obana kuzubana
nadeshiko no hana
ominaeshi
mata fujibakama
asagao no hana
Yamanoue Okura (C. 660 - 733)
Manyoshu: 8:1537-8
The seven grasses of autumn were often mentioned in verses of the Manyoshu, the earliest collection of Japanese poetry and song. Images of autumn grasses in a later anthology of court poetry, the Kokinshu, illustrate the culture of Heian Japan [784 - 1185] in a way that could not be captured by painting. Powerful and concise language draws out the subtle nuances of life and love at the time, just as nature and flowers invoke the mutable seasons of interior emotion.
The capacity of the autumn grasses for inspiring deep emotion among people in olden days may be viewed through their composite nature of beauty tinged with sadness. More than flowers of any other season, autumn grasses washed by rain and bent in the wind attain a beauty unsurpassed, and this is the beauty of flowers for the tea ceremony.
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The common theme of these seven flowers is the ""the pathos of things", also translated as "an empathy toward things" or "a pity toward things" (mono no aware 物の哀れ).
The chrysanthemum is notably absent in this flower collection.
But the chrysanthemum has its own festival on the ninth day of the ninth month, Choyo no sekku.
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Bush clover (hagi)
Lespedeza fam.
hagihara 萩原 field with bush clover
Pampas grass (susuki)
Miscanthus sinensis
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Kudzu flower, arrowroot flower, kuzu no hana
(くずのはな) 葛の花
kuzu 葛 (くず) Kudzu, Knabenkraut, Pfeilwurz
kuzu no ha 葛の葉 arrowroot leaves
kuzu kazura 葛かずら(くずかずら)Kudzu-Vine
makuzu 真葛 genuine kudzu
Pueraria lobata
Just using the word "arrowroot (kuzu)" in haiku refers to the leaves of the plant, which are white at the backside and theme of many poems since olden times.
Arrowroot is very strong and lively, the violet flowers stand up between the leaves and are full of power.
A person like a kuzu, "ningen no kuzu" means "human garbage".
makuzuhara 真葛原 (まくずはら) plain of genuine arrowroot
. fuusenkazura 風船葛 (ふうせんかずら)
Candiospermum halicacabum
kuzu horu 葛掘る (くずほる) digging for arrowroot
. . . . . kuzune horu 葛根掘る(くずねほる)
. . . . . kuzu hiku 葛引く(くずひく)pulling out arrowroot
kigo for late autumn
kuzu sarashi 葛晒し (くずさらし) bleaching arrowroot
kigo for late winter
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kigo for early summer
tama maku kuzu 玉巻く葛 (たままくくず) kudzu forming a ball
..... 玉真葛(たままくず)
tamakuzu 玉葛(たまくず)"kudzu ball"
The first green leaves of the plant are still rounded.
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Large pink (nadeshiko) Wild Carnation
fringed pinks
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yellow flowered valerian, "maiden flower" ominaeshi
女郎花 (おみなえし)
Patrinia scabiosaefolia
ominameshi おみなめし
awabana 粟花(あわばな)"millet flower"
OMINA means "Woman (onna)" and the yellow flowers remind the Japanese of sweet chestnuts cooked with rice (kuri gohan) .. eshi ... meshi ..
On a long stem there are small yellow flowers and we can enjoy them swaying in the wind. These flowers are rather feminin and gentle in their poetic feeling. When written in hiragana, this feeling is felt double.
The flower has been a favorite in Heian court poetry.
名にめでて折れるばかりぞ女郎花
我おちにきと人にかたるな 秋歌上
na ni medete oreru bakari zo ominaeshi
ware ochiniki to hito ni kataru na
I'm charmed by your name --
for that alone I plucked you.
O maidenflower,
don't tell anyone that
I have fallen from my vows.
Priest Sojo Henjo 僧正遍照 (816 - 890)
source : L. Hammer
. Soojoo Henjoo 僧正遍照 Sojo Henjo .
(for the hokku by Matsuo Basho, see below.)
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七転び髪八起の花よ女郎花
nana korobi ya oki no hana yo ominaeshi
seven tumble down
eight rise up...
maiden flowers
Issa
Tr. David Lanoue
Seven times down and eight times up, this refers to the famous
Daruma san だるま さん !
and the courtesans of the Yoshiwara quarters.
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There is another flower of this family, written with the Chinese character for MAN,
otoko eshi 男郎花, which has white flowers and a thick stem.
Patrinia villosa
otokomeshi おとこめし
oodochi no hana 荼の花(おおどちのはな)
haishoo 敗醤(はいしょう)
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Boneset, fujibakama ふじばかま 藤袴
Eupatorium fortunei
The stem can be more than one meter long. The flowers can be pinkish or white. The flowers resemble a person dressed in a formal Japanese trouser (hakama), hence the name (bakama .. hakama).
This flower also has been the theme of many waka poems of elegance and beauty. Its color fades with the deepening of autumn. It has a faint smell which gets stronger if you break the stem.
Hakama, the formal trouser-skirt
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baloon flower, Chinese bellflower,
kikyoo ききょお kichikoo 桔梗
Platycodon grandiflorus.
- Sometimes the asagao is quoted instead :
. Morning-Glory (asagao 朝顔) Convolvulaceae family. .
The pronounciation in Japanese can also be: kichikau きちかう, kichikou きちこう.
She flowers in places with a lot of sunshine. Her color is especially beautiful. There are also white flowering plants.
kigo for mid-autumn
. rindoo 竜胆 (りんどう) gentian, autumn bellflowers
sasarindoo 笹龍胆(ささりんどう)
Gentiana scabra
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sawakgikyoo 沢桔梗 (さわぎきょう) Lobelia sessilifolia
choojina ちょうじな
kigo for early autumn
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kigo for spring
buds of the bell flower, 桔梗の芽 (ききょうのめ)
kigo for late summer
"Stone Baloon Flower", iwa gikyoo 岩桔梗 (いわぎきょう)
Campanula lasiocarpa
Chijima Island Baloon Flower,
Chishima kikyoo 千島桔梗 (ちしまききょう)
Campanula chamissonis
She flowers in the harsh climate of the mountain ranges in Hokkaido and the Chishima Islands in the north of Japan.
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HAIKU
見るに我も折れるばかりぞ女郎花
miru ni ga mo oreru bakari zo ominaeshi
when I look at you
I will also break my vows -
maidenflower
Tr. Gabi Greve
Written in the years of Kanbun, Basho age 18 to 29 寛文年間
When he was making the decision to leave Iga Ueno for Edo.
A parody about the waka by
. Soojoo Henjoo 僧正遍照 Sojo Henjo .
(see above)
. Matsuo Basho 松尾芭蕉 - Archives of the WKD .
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角力とりや是は汝が女郎花
sumootori ya kore was nanji ga ominaeshi
sumo wrestler,
these woman flowers
are yours!
This hokku is from lunar 8/7 (mid-September) of 1810, when Issa was in Edo, where the elite sumo wrestlers competed. The first line almost surely has six syllables, since sumou has a long 'o' in Japanese, as indicated by the editors of Issa's diary in the complete works (3.75) and by Maruyama Kazuhiko, who separately edited Issa's Seventh Diary and his selected hokku. And Issa is not averse to "long" six-syllable first lines. In referring to the wrestler, Issa uses the polite second-person pronoun nanji, presumably because of his high status within the sport as a top wrestler. However, nanji wasn't as stilted as "thy" sounds in English. In a later variation Issa uses the neutral sonata for "you." Did he feel it was more intimate and showed the common humanity he shares with the wrestler?
What is often romantically translated into English as "maiden flower" is literally "woman flower," since omina refers to a mature woman, often an older woman. This autumn-blooming meadow plant has clusters of small yellow flowers standing at the top of long, elegant stalks, and the folk etymology of the plant name is that the way the long stalks bend and sway in the wind suggests something female to males. In Issa's hokku, he may be symbolically offering a stalk of the flowers to the wrestler, or he may be telling the wrestler that these woman flowers are "yours" because they are like him and best express the self-image the wrestler is unconsciously projecting to Issa.
In either case, it seems to be the thin, unmuscular, delicate quality of the flowers that causes Issa to want to give some of the flowers to the big, corpulent, muscular wrestler. Issa usually sympathizes with losing wrestlers more than with the winners, and he likes to point out situations in which the apparently invulnerable wrestlers show vulnerability or unexpected sensitivity. In the present hokku he may be addressing the soul of the wrestler and saying that he knows the wrestler has a very sensitive part inside the armor-like male body that he has built up. In another hokku Issa mentions a wrestler with a stalk of flowers stuck in his topknot, so he may be wishing the wrestler in the above hokku would show his other side and wear woman flowers in his hair.
Is Issa engaged in gender bending? I don't know, but he was familiar with the Yi Jing and with yin-yang philosophy, and that means he was familiar with the basic principle that extreme yin turns into yang and extreme yang turns into yin, and he may feel the sumo wrestler embodies an extreme yang position. The hokku before this one in Issa's diary also associates a sumo wrestler with a delicate flower that is very sensitive to light and to its surroundings -- a morning glory.
Chris Drake
. Sumo wrestling 相撲 .
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世の中はくねり法度ぞ女郎花
yo [no] naka wa kuneri-hatto zo ominaeshi
woman flower
you know we have laws
against such curving
Tr. Chris Drake
This hokku was written in the 8th month (September) of 1812, while Issa was still based in Edo but was on a short trip back to his hometown to prepare for moving back there. In the hokku Issa seems to be flirting with and teasing a woman flower beside a path somewhere. There is a long tradition in Japanese poetry of addressing woman flowers as if they were human women, one that goes back in the early days of waka, when womina (not cognate with English 'woman') meant "beautiful woman," but by Issa's time the pronunciation was omina, and it referred to any grown woman.
It is often translated as "maiden flower," but there was another word for girl or young woman: ominago. In autumn the tiny bright yellow flowers of the bush grow in wide clusters at the top of long, tall stalks that curve gracefully when they bend in the wind, and the stalk is rather thick, allowing it to bend far and sinuously. The strong yellow of the flowers almost equals that of spring rapeseed blossoms, but the flower clusters are diaphanous and more delicate.
Issa addresses the flower (actually a cluster of tiny flowers) with mock solemnity and outrage, telling "her" that, as everyone knows, the samurai authorities have instituted laws against the kind of bending and curving she is doing outside in broad daylight. Does she think she can brazenly ignore the law and sinuously bend and sway right beside a public road? Issa no doubt refers to numerous laws and injunctions, beginning with the outlawing of female Kabuki troupes in 1629, that made it a crime for women to perform in public or wear stylish or provocative robes in public.
The obvious irony saturating Issa's pompous warning of course strengthens the compliment Issa is paying to the flower and to the eye-catching way the stalk and flower move in the breeze. Issa also seems to be parodying the various laws themselves by claiming they apply even to flowers. This hokku seems to be still another oblique criticism by Issa of the authoritarian and highly patriarchal samurai ruling class.
Chris Drake
ominaeshi karamitsuki-keri shiwa-ashi ni
womanflower
wrapping around
my wrinkled foot
. Comment by Chris Drake .
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nora ni saku na wa kore made zo kusa no hana
Flowers of the grass:
scarcely shown, and withered
name and all.
.. Asei
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Related words
***** Seven Herbs of Spring (haru no nanakusa) (Japan)
***** . kanokosoo 纈草 (かのこそう) Valeriana officinalis .
Baldrian
AUTUMN PLANTS - SAIJIKI
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11/11/2007
11/09/2007
Platanus (sycamore)
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Platanus (sycamore)
***** Location: Europa, other areas
***** Season: Late Autumn
***** Category: Plant
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Explanation
sycomore
Platanus is a small genus of trees native to the Northern Hemisphere. They are the sole members of the family Platanaceae.
They are all large trees to 30–50 m tall, deciduous (except for P. kerrii), and are mostly found in riparian or other wetland habitats in the wild, though proving drought tolerant in cultivation away from streams.
They are known as planes in Europe, and as sycamores in North America. (Outside North America, the name "sycamore" refers to either the fig Ficus sycomorus, the plant originally so named, or the Great Maple, Acer pseudoplatanus.)
The flowers are reduced and are borne in balls (globose head); 3–7 hairy sepals may be fused at base, and the petals are 3–7 (or no) and spathulate. Male and female flowers are separate, but on the same plant (monoecious). The number of heads in one cluster (inflorescence) is indicative of the species. The male flower has with 3–8 stamens; the female has a superior ovary with 3–7 carpels. Plane trees are wind-pollinated. Male balls fall off the branch after shedding their pollen. The female flowers, on the other hand, remain attached to the branch firmly.
The tree literally shrugs off pollution because it is continually outgrowing and shedding its bark. This is why the bark has an attractive "camouflage" pattern in shades of green, gray and cream. The London plane (Platanus acerifolia) is thought to have sprung up in Oxford, England in the 17th century.
© More in the WIKIPEDIA !
Platanus hispanica ... London Plane
Platanus occidentalis ... American Sycamore, American Plane or Buttonwood
Platanus wrightii ... Arizona Sycamore
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Two travellers, worn out by the heat of the summer's sun, laid themselves down at noon under the wide-spreading branches of a Plane Tree. As they rested under its shade, one of the Travellers said to the other,
"What a singularly useless tree is the Plane! It bears no fruit, and is not of the least service to man."
The Plane Tree, interrupting him, said,
"You ungrateful fellows! Do you, while receiving benefits from me and resting under my shade, dare to describe me as useless, and unprofitable?'
Some men underrate their best blessings.
Aesop's Fables
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Worldwide use
Germany
Platane
In Germany, we have many Platanenallee, alleys with this trees by the roadside. They are a joy to drive through in autumn!
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Japan
Momijiba-suzukake (London plane tree)
lit. maple leaf hanging bell tree
Platanus acerifolia
...................... kigo for late spring
flower of the platanus, suzukake no hana
鈴懸の花 (すずかけのはな)
puratanasu no hana プラタナスの花(ぷらたなすのはな)
..... botan no ki 釦の木(ぼたんのき)
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...................... kigo for late autumn
yellow leaves of the platanus, momijiba もみじば
momijiba fuu 紅葉葉楓(もみじばふう)
Liquidambar formosana(楓, kaede, maple tree)
of Chinese origin.
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Things found on the way
Right outside my front door grows a giant American Sycamore, an outsized tree for a cramped city neighborhood. It's crown of branches crowd in so close to the second floor windows that when I am in that room I feel like I'm living in a tree house.
My favorite description of a sycamore, from a poem
by Gregory Orr, "Elegy," (for James Wright):
.................tree
from which the grey bark
peels and drops until
it stands half
in rags, half in radiance.
Larry Bole
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I love the trees surrounding our house in this little "neck" of the woods (being playful... I might say due to the colors of autumn and my family: me, my wife, sons, and cats, being born in the
South... "redneck" of the woods.)
trees
in such symmetry
spread toward heaven
while holding earth tight
display their colorful array
yet never see the sight
"chibi" (pen-name for Dennis M. Holmes)
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HAIKU
faint autumn sun --
a plane tree leaf drifts
and tumbles down
© Isabelle Prondzynski / Photo Album
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platanin list
pade na deteljice --
vse triperesne
a sycomore leaf
falls onto the clovers --
all are tree-leaf
une feuille de platane
tombe sur les trèfles --
tous à trois feuilles
© Alenka Zorman. tempslibres 2005
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autumn sun ...
a sycamore tree
changes colour
Ella Wagemakers, 2011
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the nakedness
of sycamores stretching
dreams
photo credit : one of our front yard trees,
Sacramento, California, June 2012、by Rebecca Judge
In Sacramento, California, USA : our sycamores are molting, now in June.
molting sycamore
kigo for early summer
Louis Osofsky
- WKD facebook 2012 -
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Related words
***** . Autumn Leaves (momiji, Japan)
yellow leaves, colored leaves
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Platanus (sycamore)
***** Location: Europa, other areas
***** Season: Late Autumn
***** Category: Plant
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Explanation
sycomore
Platanus is a small genus of trees native to the Northern Hemisphere. They are the sole members of the family Platanaceae.
They are all large trees to 30–50 m tall, deciduous (except for P. kerrii), and are mostly found in riparian or other wetland habitats in the wild, though proving drought tolerant in cultivation away from streams.
They are known as planes in Europe, and as sycamores in North America. (Outside North America, the name "sycamore" refers to either the fig Ficus sycomorus, the plant originally so named, or the Great Maple, Acer pseudoplatanus.)
The flowers are reduced and are borne in balls (globose head); 3–7 hairy sepals may be fused at base, and the petals are 3–7 (or no) and spathulate. Male and female flowers are separate, but on the same plant (monoecious). The number of heads in one cluster (inflorescence) is indicative of the species. The male flower has with 3–8 stamens; the female has a superior ovary with 3–7 carpels. Plane trees are wind-pollinated. Male balls fall off the branch after shedding their pollen. The female flowers, on the other hand, remain attached to the branch firmly.
The tree literally shrugs off pollution because it is continually outgrowing and shedding its bark. This is why the bark has an attractive "camouflage" pattern in shades of green, gray and cream. The London plane (Platanus acerifolia) is thought to have sprung up in Oxford, England in the 17th century.
© More in the WIKIPEDIA !
Platanus hispanica ... London Plane
Platanus occidentalis ... American Sycamore, American Plane or Buttonwood
Platanus wrightii ... Arizona Sycamore
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Two travellers, worn out by the heat of the summer's sun, laid themselves down at noon under the wide-spreading branches of a Plane Tree. As they rested under its shade, one of the Travellers said to the other,
"What a singularly useless tree is the Plane! It bears no fruit, and is not of the least service to man."
The Plane Tree, interrupting him, said,
"You ungrateful fellows! Do you, while receiving benefits from me and resting under my shade, dare to describe me as useless, and unprofitable?'
Some men underrate their best blessings.
Aesop's Fables
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Worldwide use
Germany
Platane
In Germany, we have many Platanenallee, alleys with this trees by the roadside. They are a joy to drive through in autumn!
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Japan
Momijiba-suzukake (London plane tree)
lit. maple leaf hanging bell tree
Platanus acerifolia
...................... kigo for late spring
flower of the platanus, suzukake no hana
鈴懸の花 (すずかけのはな)
puratanasu no hana プラタナスの花(ぷらたなすのはな)
..... botan no ki 釦の木(ぼたんのき)
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...................... kigo for late autumn
yellow leaves of the platanus, momijiba もみじば
momijiba fuu 紅葉葉楓(もみじばふう)
Liquidambar formosana(楓, kaede, maple tree)
of Chinese origin.
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Things found on the way
Right outside my front door grows a giant American Sycamore, an outsized tree for a cramped city neighborhood. It's crown of branches crowd in so close to the second floor windows that when I am in that room I feel like I'm living in a tree house.
My favorite description of a sycamore, from a poem
by Gregory Orr, "Elegy," (for James Wright):
.................tree
from which the grey bark
peels and drops until
it stands half
in rags, half in radiance.
Larry Bole
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I love the trees surrounding our house in this little "neck" of the woods (being playful... I might say due to the colors of autumn and my family: me, my wife, sons, and cats, being born in the
South... "redneck" of the woods.)
trees
in such symmetry
spread toward heaven
while holding earth tight
display their colorful array
yet never see the sight
"chibi" (pen-name for Dennis M. Holmes)
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HAIKU
faint autumn sun --
a plane tree leaf drifts
and tumbles down
© Isabelle Prondzynski / Photo Album
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platanin list
pade na deteljice --
vse triperesne
a sycomore leaf
falls onto the clovers --
all are tree-leaf
une feuille de platane
tombe sur les trèfles --
tous à trois feuilles
© Alenka Zorman. tempslibres 2005
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autumn sun ...
a sycamore tree
changes colour
Ella Wagemakers, 2011
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the nakedness
of sycamores stretching
dreams
photo credit : one of our front yard trees,
Sacramento, California, June 2012、by Rebecca Judge
In Sacramento, California, USA : our sycamores are molting, now in June.
molting sycamore
kigo for early summer
Louis Osofsky
- WKD facebook 2012 -
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Related words
***** . Autumn Leaves (momiji, Japan)
yellow leaves, colored leaves
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11/07/2007
WINTER Food
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WINTER FOOD
WASHOKU SAIJIKI
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11/06/2007
Misaki School Haiku
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美咲中央小学校 俳句 活動
Misaki School Haiku Club
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第2回 句会ライヴin美咲中央小学校
Second Haiku Life Meeting at Misaki School
November 2007
All the students from the fourth, fifth and sixth grade took part in the meeting. Some visitors and mothers could also participate.
After a warm-up session with associations to the word SWEET (amai) to get the mind working, they started scribbeling away.
They had to compose a poem of five-seven-five on the spot, within the limit of about five minutes.
All poems had to include ... slowly, leisurely
After a first round, they had to rework their poems and add a kigo of autumn, which the teacher had written on the blackboard.
Then the best haiku selected by the teacher were put on the blackboard and all discussed them eagerly.
Finally the voting of all students, then the special mentions by sensei and myself.
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グランプリ Grand Prix
ゆっくりと たちのぼるゆげ 秋うらら
yukkuri to tachinoboru yuge aki urara
slowly
the steam rises ...
wonderful autumn day
5年 こうき / 5th grade, Kooki
2 位 Second Prize
ゆっくりと ながれるよぞら 秋の風
yukkuri to nagareru yozora aki no kaze
slowly
the night sky passes by -
autumn wind
6年 あき / 6th grade, Aki
3 位 Third Prize
ゆっくりと かん字をなぞる 秋の空
yukkuri to kanji o nazoru aki no sora
slowly
I trace the Chinese characters -
autumn sky
4年 けんし / 4th grade, Kenshi
("tracing Chinese characters" many many times is a way to memorize them used by Japanese students.)
Parents and Gabi observing
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ガ ビ 賞 Gabi's Prize
ゆっくりと 茶をつぎながら てるもみじ
yukkuri to cha o tsuginagara teru momiji
slowly
she pours more tea -
bright shining red leaves
6年 はじめ / 6th grade, Hajime
I could easily see an old couple, the author's grandparents maybe, sitting at the porch and sipping tea in the afternoon. It feels like such a peaceful and rural atmosphere. It had rather a "grown-up" touch to it.
Later I learned Hajime was the author. He is one of the students that live up here in Ohaga in the terraced rice fields in my valley, and he had indeed written about his grandparents.
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こうしま賞 Teacher's Special Prize
ゆっくりと いっしょにかえろ 秋の空
yukkuri to issho ni kaeru aki no sora
leisurely
we walk home together -
bright autumn sky
6年 やよい, 6th grade, Yayoi
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入 選 Runners Up
ゆっくりと はなしがしたい 秋の空
yukkuri to hanashi ga shitai aki no sora
I want to talk to her
leisurely ...
autumn sky
4年 ゆう / 4th grade, Yuu
ゆったりと 入るおんせん 秋うらら
yuttari to hairu onsen aki urara
so leisurely
we enjoy the hot spring -
fine autumn day
5年 りょうた / 5th grade, Ryuuta
ゆったりと じゅぎょうがすぎる 秋の空
yukkuri to jugyoo ga sugiru aki no sora
slowly, leisurely
the lesson carries on -
autumn sky
5年 みずき / 5th grade, Mizuki
The best haiku
ゆったりと 花をゆらす 秋の風
yuttari to hana o yurasu aki no kaze
leisurely
it lets the flowers sway -
autumn wind
6年 ゆうた / 6th grade, Yuuta
ゆっくりと おおきくなあれ 小春の日
yukkuri to ookiku naare ... koharu no hi
take all your time
to grow up leisurely ...
Indian Summer Day
やすよ() / Yasuyo, Mother of a student
Incidentally, she was the mother of Kooki, who got the Grand Prize.
Congratulations to all the winners!
皆、おめでとうございます !
Gabi Greve, Misaki-Cho, Ohaga
句作りの子供の笑顔 秋うらら
all these smiles
of kids writing haiku -
fine autumn day
ガビ / Gabi
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***** Misaki School Haiku Meeting November 2006
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美咲中央小学校 俳句 活動
Misaki School Haiku Club
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第2回 句会ライヴin美咲中央小学校
Second Haiku Life Meeting at Misaki School
November 2007
All the students from the fourth, fifth and sixth grade took part in the meeting. Some visitors and mothers could also participate.
After a warm-up session with associations to the word SWEET (amai) to get the mind working, they started scribbeling away.
They had to compose a poem of five-seven-five on the spot, within the limit of about five minutes.
All poems had to include ... slowly, leisurely
After a first round, they had to rework their poems and add a kigo of autumn, which the teacher had written on the blackboard.
Then the best haiku selected by the teacher were put on the blackboard and all discussed them eagerly.
Finally the voting of all students, then the special mentions by sensei and myself.
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グランプリ Grand Prix
ゆっくりと たちのぼるゆげ 秋うらら
yukkuri to tachinoboru yuge aki urara
slowly
the steam rises ...
wonderful autumn day
5年 こうき / 5th grade, Kooki
2 位 Second Prize
ゆっくりと ながれるよぞら 秋の風
yukkuri to nagareru yozora aki no kaze
slowly
the night sky passes by -
autumn wind
6年 あき / 6th grade, Aki
3 位 Third Prize
ゆっくりと かん字をなぞる 秋の空
yukkuri to kanji o nazoru aki no sora
slowly
I trace the Chinese characters -
autumn sky
4年 けんし / 4th grade, Kenshi
("tracing Chinese characters" many many times is a way to memorize them used by Japanese students.)
Parents and Gabi observing
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ガ ビ 賞 Gabi's Prize
ゆっくりと 茶をつぎながら てるもみじ
yukkuri to cha o tsuginagara teru momiji
slowly
she pours more tea -
bright shining red leaves
6年 はじめ / 6th grade, Hajime
I could easily see an old couple, the author's grandparents maybe, sitting at the porch and sipping tea in the afternoon. It feels like such a peaceful and rural atmosphere. It had rather a "grown-up" touch to it.
Later I learned Hajime was the author. He is one of the students that live up here in Ohaga in the terraced rice fields in my valley, and he had indeed written about his grandparents.
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こうしま賞 Teacher's Special Prize
ゆっくりと いっしょにかえろ 秋の空
yukkuri to issho ni kaeru aki no sora
leisurely
we walk home together -
bright autumn sky
6年 やよい, 6th grade, Yayoi
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入 選 Runners Up
ゆっくりと はなしがしたい 秋の空
yukkuri to hanashi ga shitai aki no sora
I want to talk to her
leisurely ...
autumn sky
4年 ゆう / 4th grade, Yuu
ゆったりと 入るおんせん 秋うらら
yuttari to hairu onsen aki urara
so leisurely
we enjoy the hot spring -
fine autumn day
5年 りょうた / 5th grade, Ryuuta
ゆったりと じゅぎょうがすぎる 秋の空
yukkuri to jugyoo ga sugiru aki no sora
slowly, leisurely
the lesson carries on -
autumn sky
5年 みずき / 5th grade, Mizuki
The best haiku
ゆったりと 花をゆらす 秋の風
yuttari to hana o yurasu aki no kaze
leisurely
it lets the flowers sway -
autumn wind
6年 ゆうた / 6th grade, Yuuta
ゆっくりと おおきくなあれ 小春の日
yukkuri to ookiku naare ... koharu no hi
take all your time
to grow up leisurely ...
Indian Summer Day
やすよ() / Yasuyo, Mother of a student
Incidentally, she was the mother of Kooki, who got the Grand Prize.
Congratulations to all the winners!
皆、おめでとうございます !
Gabi Greve, Misaki-Cho, Ohaga
句作りの子供の笑顔 秋うらら
all these smiles
of kids writing haiku -
fine autumn day
ガビ / Gabi
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***** Misaki School Haiku Meeting November 2006
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Autumn deepens (aki fukashi)
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Autumn deepens (aki fukashi)
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: Late Autumn
***** Category: Season
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Explanation
autumn is deep (aki fukashi 秋深し (あきふかし)
..... aki takenawa 秋闌(あきたけなわ)
deep autumn, shinshuu 深秋(しんしゅう)
autumn is becoming deeper, aki takuru 秋闌くる(あきたくる)
..... aki fukuru 秋更くる(あきふくる)
aki fukamu 秋深む(あきふかむ)
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Worldwide use
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Things found on the way
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HAIKU
秋深き 隣は何を する人ぞ
aki fukaki tonari wa nani o suru hito zo
Matsuo Basho, (26th day, Ninth Month, 1694)
He wrote this haiku a few weeks before his death. He was in Osaka, too ill to attend a poetry gathering at a disciple's house, and sent this poem.
There are various translations of this famous haiku.
autumn deep
the neighbor, what
is it he does?
© William J. Higginson
Paterson Pieces: Poems, 1969-1979
Autumn deepening –
my neigbour
how does he live, I wonder?
(© Haruo Shirane)
Deep is autumn,
and in its deep air
I somehow wondered
who my neighbour is.
(© Nobuyuki Yuasa)
Autumn deepens –
the man next door, what
does he do for a living?
(© Makoto Ueda)
It is deep autumn
my neighbor
how does he live, I wonder?
(© R.H.Blyth)
Autumn's end –
how does my
neighbour live?
(© Lucien Stryck)
In my dark winter
lying ill, at last I ask
how fares my neighbour.
(© Peter Beilenson)
The depth of autumn:
still my neighbour gives no sign of life.
I wonder how he lives?
(© Harold Stewart)
This deep in autumn,
next door what
do the people do?
(© Thomas McAuley)
Близится зима –
не мешало бы узнать
как живёт сосед.
© dmitri smirnov
.. .. ..
Autumn deepens —
The man next door, what
does he do for a living?
Barbara Louise Ungar
Deep autumn—
my neighbor,
how does he live, I wonder?
the zen frog
... ...
L’automne profond —
quant à mon voisin, que fait
donc cet homme au juste ?
nekojita.free.fr
en plein automne
que fait-il
mon voisin
magoo
... ...
Meio do outono
O que estará fazendo
Aquele meu vizinho?
Andrei Cunha
.........................................
Basho uses the form FUKAKI instead of FUKASHI.fukashi would indicate a cut, a break after line one, as is expressed in some translations here with the dash or other means. With a break, the meaning would tend to the more negative feeling ... who cares about the neighbours ...
By using FUKAKI, however, there is no explicit cut and the meaning leads over to the next two lines. The meaning now leads to a friendly warm wondering about the neighbours.
Sometimes the meaning of a haiku is better shown by not using a cut, but by combining the three sections into one idea.
aki fukaki tonari ...
next to me, there is autumn coming to its end ...
Basho lived in a place where the space to the neighbuor was just one thin wall and he could hear everything from next-door (next-wall, so to say). But beyond the thin wall, Basho could also hear the deepening autumn as his neighbour, so to day, in space.
autumn deepens
and I wonder,
what is my neighbour doing?
Tr. Gabi Greve, inspired by Hasegawa Kai
Peeking in© Photo Gabi Greve, 2007
ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo
Daniel Gallimore on this haiku
WHR 2000
Melopoeia
Basho is renowned - according to Shirane and other Japanese scholars from the Meiji Era onwards - for the musicality of his style, and so it is to Shirane’s translation of a poem written by Basho in the autumn of 1694, shortly before he died, that I turn for an example of melopoeia (i.e. musicality).
Shirane cites this poem as an example of the return to the low style which characterises Basho’s last years. In the first part of his career the poet had sought to transcend his humble origins through study of classical, medieval and Chinese poetics but (in the words of Shirane), he returns in his last years ‘to the exploration of various aspects of Tokugawa commoner life and language.’ What Shirane does not mention, however, perhaps because it is a commonplace of both the high and low styles, is the poem’s remarkable musicality:
Aki fukaki
Tonari wa nani o
Suru hito zo
Autumn deepening -
My neighbour
How does he live, I wonder?
This is a haiku which can survive even the worst of translations, which Shirane’s certainly is not. For even if we do not know its context we can immediately appreciate the implicit image of the poet reaching out for neighbourly warmth as the days get shorter and colder.
That is one way of reading the poem, an instinctive one perhaps, but in fact the poem is a good deal more subtle. A simple contrast of cold and warmth would be enough to constitute a phrase in some extended lyric, but we know that good haiku - especially those by Basho - offer more than simple antitheses, and this is a point which is particularly important to translators trying to render some of that musical complexity.
The first phrase is phonologically closed: the rhyme on aki, the crisp k and delicate i sounds, describe the sweetly relentless onset of autumn and (to admit the contextual metaphor) of Basho’s declining years. The two na sounds are clammy, moist; the poet weakens. But the o at the turn of the line is a very different, majestic sound that is repeated in the emphatic particle zo.
In other words, the solution to that invasive, get-you-down clamminess is not necessarily to visit his neighbour but to go on a journey - as (in a sense) he has been doing throughout his career - to wander, to guess, to allow the poetry to justify his existence. What better way after all to face old age than to carry on using one’s mind?
The final zo ends the poem on a note of triumph, telling the world that he is still a haijin after all, and in fact the poem was submitted as the hokku for a poetry session which Basho was too sick to attend.
The English language, on the whole, lacks the capacity of Japanese for compression of sounds, which pushes Shirane to the other extreme of opening up the spaces between the words and foregrounding their denotative meanings. The diphthongs in the first line (‘au-’ and ‘dee’) establish the contemplative pace. The detachment of ‘my neighbour’ puts the neighbour in mind (makes him the object), since this is not an antisocial poem, and then those four monosyllables - ‘how’, ‘does’, ‘he’, ‘live’ - offer a third aspect, communicating the mystery of the neighbour’s existence.
The phrase is also an effectively ambiguous version of nani o suru; both questions could refer to a multiplicity of activities. Shirane does not reproduce the sound values of the original but he does maintain the tripartite diction.
. . . . .
snow in my valley -
what are my poor neighbours
doing right now?
. Gabi Greve - after the BIG earthquake
Big Earthquake on March 11, 2011
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fall deepens
the neighbor next door
grills sauries
Satoru Kanematsu
When a haikuist incorporates another artist's melodic line into their poem, it is considered a compliment and a tribute. Taking this idea a little further and almost in parody, in his haiku above Satoru Kanematsu answered a question master poet Matsuo Basho posed a few weeks before his death in 1694 when he wrote:
Fall deepens
what are the neighbors
doing now?
Narrative poems like this rely on the grammar of the sentence to provide the literal meaning of the poem, and rely on its irony to point to the pathos of a dying man not knowing what his neighbors are up to.
Satoru Kanematsu (Nagoya)
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秋深し 大地に下りる 竜の枝
deepening autumn -
Dragon branches reaching
down to mother earth
© Photo and Haiku: Gabi Greve
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autumn deepens -
the spider still weaves
sunbeams
© Photo and Haiku: Gabi Greve
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autumn deepens -
this internet pilgrim
on the narrow road
. Gabi : Dragon Temples September 2012 .
- Shared at Joys of Japan, September 2012 -
autumn deepens -
what are the neighbours
doing online or real
Hideo Suzuki
autumn deepens
ripples echo on the pond
froggy has email
Chris Loft
शरद ऋतु गहराई
और मुझे आश्चर्य ,
क्या कर रहा है मेरा पड़ोसी?
Hindi translation by Charan Gill
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autumn deepens -
leaves illustrate gradation
coloring from the top
- Shared by Hideo Suzuki -
Joys of Japan, October 2012
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Related words
***** Autumn (aki) Japan, worldwide
***** . Autumn dusk (aki no kure) Japan
***** Autumn comes to an end .. Japan. Many related kigo
***** . Autumn Melancholy Europe
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Autumn deepens (aki fukashi)
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: Late Autumn
***** Category: Season
*****************************
Explanation
autumn is deep (aki fukashi 秋深し (あきふかし)
..... aki takenawa 秋闌(あきたけなわ)
deep autumn, shinshuu 深秋(しんしゅう)
autumn is becoming deeper, aki takuru 秋闌くる(あきたくる)
..... aki fukuru 秋更くる(あきふくる)
aki fukamu 秋深む(あきふかむ)
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Worldwide use
*****************************
Things found on the way
*****************************
HAIKU
秋深き 隣は何を する人ぞ
aki fukaki tonari wa nani o suru hito zo
Matsuo Basho, (26th day, Ninth Month, 1694)
He wrote this haiku a few weeks before his death. He was in Osaka, too ill to attend a poetry gathering at a disciple's house, and sent this poem.
There are various translations of this famous haiku.
autumn deep
the neighbor, what
is it he does?
© William J. Higginson
Paterson Pieces: Poems, 1969-1979
Autumn deepening –
my neigbour
how does he live, I wonder?
(© Haruo Shirane)
Deep is autumn,
and in its deep air
I somehow wondered
who my neighbour is.
(© Nobuyuki Yuasa)
Autumn deepens –
the man next door, what
does he do for a living?
(© Makoto Ueda)
It is deep autumn
my neighbor
how does he live, I wonder?
(© R.H.Blyth)
Autumn's end –
how does my
neighbour live?
(© Lucien Stryck)
In my dark winter
lying ill, at last I ask
how fares my neighbour.
(© Peter Beilenson)
The depth of autumn:
still my neighbour gives no sign of life.
I wonder how he lives?
(© Harold Stewart)
This deep in autumn,
next door what
do the people do?
(© Thomas McAuley)
Близится зима –
не мешало бы узнать
как живёт сосед.
© dmitri smirnov
.. .. ..
Autumn deepens —
The man next door, what
does he do for a living?
Barbara Louise Ungar
Deep autumn—
my neighbor,
how does he live, I wonder?
the zen frog
... ...
L’automne profond —
quant à mon voisin, que fait
donc cet homme au juste ?
nekojita.free.fr
en plein automne
que fait-il
mon voisin
magoo
... ...
Meio do outono
O que estará fazendo
Aquele meu vizinho?
Andrei Cunha
.........................................
Basho uses the form FUKAKI instead of FUKASHI.fukashi would indicate a cut, a break after line one, as is expressed in some translations here with the dash or other means. With a break, the meaning would tend to the more negative feeling ... who cares about the neighbours ...
By using FUKAKI, however, there is no explicit cut and the meaning leads over to the next two lines. The meaning now leads to a friendly warm wondering about the neighbours.
Sometimes the meaning of a haiku is better shown by not using a cut, but by combining the three sections into one idea.
aki fukaki tonari ...
next to me, there is autumn coming to its end ...
Basho lived in a place where the space to the neighbuor was just one thin wall and he could hear everything from next-door (next-wall, so to say). But beyond the thin wall, Basho could also hear the deepening autumn as his neighbour, so to day, in space.
autumn deepens
and I wonder,
what is my neighbour doing?
Tr. Gabi Greve, inspired by Hasegawa Kai
Peeking in© Photo Gabi Greve, 2007
ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo
Daniel Gallimore on this haiku
WHR 2000
Melopoeia
Basho is renowned - according to Shirane and other Japanese scholars from the Meiji Era onwards - for the musicality of his style, and so it is to Shirane’s translation of a poem written by Basho in the autumn of 1694, shortly before he died, that I turn for an example of melopoeia (i.e. musicality).
Shirane cites this poem as an example of the return to the low style which characterises Basho’s last years. In the first part of his career the poet had sought to transcend his humble origins through study of classical, medieval and Chinese poetics but (in the words of Shirane), he returns in his last years ‘to the exploration of various aspects of Tokugawa commoner life and language.’ What Shirane does not mention, however, perhaps because it is a commonplace of both the high and low styles, is the poem’s remarkable musicality:
Aki fukaki
Tonari wa nani o
Suru hito zo
Autumn deepening -
My neighbour
How does he live, I wonder?
This is a haiku which can survive even the worst of translations, which Shirane’s certainly is not. For even if we do not know its context we can immediately appreciate the implicit image of the poet reaching out for neighbourly warmth as the days get shorter and colder.
That is one way of reading the poem, an instinctive one perhaps, but in fact the poem is a good deal more subtle. A simple contrast of cold and warmth would be enough to constitute a phrase in some extended lyric, but we know that good haiku - especially those by Basho - offer more than simple antitheses, and this is a point which is particularly important to translators trying to render some of that musical complexity.
The first phrase is phonologically closed: the rhyme on aki, the crisp k and delicate i sounds, describe the sweetly relentless onset of autumn and (to admit the contextual metaphor) of Basho’s declining years. The two na sounds are clammy, moist; the poet weakens. But the o at the turn of the line is a very different, majestic sound that is repeated in the emphatic particle zo.
In other words, the solution to that invasive, get-you-down clamminess is not necessarily to visit his neighbour but to go on a journey - as (in a sense) he has been doing throughout his career - to wander, to guess, to allow the poetry to justify his existence. What better way after all to face old age than to carry on using one’s mind?
The final zo ends the poem on a note of triumph, telling the world that he is still a haijin after all, and in fact the poem was submitted as the hokku for a poetry session which Basho was too sick to attend.
The English language, on the whole, lacks the capacity of Japanese for compression of sounds, which pushes Shirane to the other extreme of opening up the spaces between the words and foregrounding their denotative meanings. The diphthongs in the first line (‘au-’ and ‘dee’) establish the contemplative pace. The detachment of ‘my neighbour’ puts the neighbour in mind (makes him the object), since this is not an antisocial poem, and then those four monosyllables - ‘how’, ‘does’, ‘he’, ‘live’ - offer a third aspect, communicating the mystery of the neighbour’s existence.
The phrase is also an effectively ambiguous version of nani o suru; both questions could refer to a multiplicity of activities. Shirane does not reproduce the sound values of the original but he does maintain the tripartite diction.
. . . . .
snow in my valley -
what are my poor neighbours
doing right now?
. Gabi Greve - after the BIG earthquake
Big Earthquake on March 11, 2011
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
fall deepens
the neighbor next door
grills sauries
Satoru Kanematsu
When a haikuist incorporates another artist's melodic line into their poem, it is considered a compliment and a tribute. Taking this idea a little further and almost in parody, in his haiku above Satoru Kanematsu answered a question master poet Matsuo Basho posed a few weeks before his death in 1694 when he wrote:
Fall deepens
what are the neighbors
doing now?
Narrative poems like this rely on the grammar of the sentence to provide the literal meaning of the poem, and rely on its irony to point to the pathos of a dying man not knowing what his neighbors are up to.
Satoru Kanematsu (Nagoya)
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秋深し 大地に下りる 竜の枝
deepening autumn -
Dragon branches reaching
down to mother earth
© Photo and Haiku: Gabi Greve
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
autumn deepens -
the spider still weaves
sunbeams
© Photo and Haiku: Gabi Greve
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autumn deepens -
this internet pilgrim
on the narrow road
. Gabi : Dragon Temples September 2012 .
- Shared at Joys of Japan, September 2012 -
autumn deepens -
what are the neighbours
doing online or real
Hideo Suzuki
autumn deepens
ripples echo on the pond
froggy has email
Chris Loft
शरद ऋतु गहराई
और मुझे आश्चर्य ,
क्या कर रहा है मेरा पड़ोसी?
Hindi translation by Charan Gill
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autumn deepens -
leaves illustrate gradation
coloring from the top
- Shared by Hideo Suzuki -
Joys of Japan, October 2012
*****************************
Related words
***** Autumn (aki) Japan, worldwide
***** . Autumn dusk (aki no kure) Japan
***** Autumn comes to an end .. Japan. Many related kigo
***** . Autumn Melancholy Europe
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Tatami floor mats
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. Tatamicho, Tatamichō, Tatamimachi 畳町
Tatami district in Edo .
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Changing tatami floor mats (tatami gae)
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: Mid-winter
***** Category: Humanity
*****************************
Explanation
Woven mats of rice straw traditionally used to cover floors in Japan.
Tatami (畳 )(originally meaning "folded and piled, tatamu ") mats are a traditional Japanese flooring. Made of woven straw, and traditionally packed with rice straw (though nowadays sometimes with styrofoam), tatami are made in individual mats of uniform size and shape, bordered by brocade or plain green cloth.
Tatami were originally a luxury item for the wealthy at a time when lower classes had mat-covered dirt floors. Tatami were gradually popularized and finally reached the homes of commoners towards the end of the 17th century.
There are various rules concerning the number and layout of tatami mats; an inauspicious layout is said to bring bad fortune. In homes, the mats must not be laid in a grid pattern, and in any layout there is never a point where the corners of three or four mats intersect.
In Japan, the size of a room is typically measured by the number of tatami mats (畳 -jō, joo, jou). The traditional dimensions of the mats were fixed at 90 cm by 180 cm (1.62 square meters) by 5 cm (35.5 in by 71 in by 2 in).
Half mats, 90 cm by 90 cm (35.5 in by 35.5 in) are also made. Shops were traditionally designed to be 5½ mats (8.91m²), and tea rooms and tea houses are frequently 4½ mats (7.29m²). Because the size is fixed, rooms in traditional Japanese construction measure in multiples of 90 cm. Mats from Kyoto (Kyo-tatami, Kyoo datami) and other parts of western Japan are slightly larger than those from Tokyo and eastern Japan at 95.5 cm by 191 cm (1.82m²; 37.6 in by 75.2 in).
Edges for tatamis come in many patterns for different occasions.
Tatami is made with a rush plant, igusa.
Igusa is a perennial plant of the family of igusa. Igusa smells good. It has a fresh, grassy smell. In English, they are called rushes. Igusa blooms from May through June. The plant grows up to a length of 100 centimeters or less. They grow in marshes where sunshine is good. In Japan, there are 30 kinds of igusa growing in many different areas.
Tatami is made from natural igusa that must be flexible from the root to the tip, and the thickness and the color varies slightly. About 4000 to 7000 igusa are used for the tatami. Generally the best tatami uses more and longer igusa rushes.
There are many benefits in using igusa such as air purification, heat insulation, elasticity, cooling (especially in hot summer seasons), eco-friendly and sound absorbing qualities. Igusa tatami is also smooth to the touch, so it is comfortable for babies and young children. Most Japanese like tatami. Many homes have at least one tatami room.
© More in the WIKIPEDIA !
In Edo, the 伊阿弥 / 藺阿弥 Iami family was appointed by Tokugawa Ieyasu.
The family business dated back to the Muromachi period.
藺阿弥 also grew igusa rush material. The family name Iami was given by 織田信長 Oda Nobunaga.
The tatami maker family later served under Toyotomi Hideyoshi.
- reference source : tatami-tatami.cocolog-nifty... -
. Tatamicho, Tatamichō, Tatamimachi 畳町
Tatami district in Edo .
tatamiya 畳屋 - 畳職人 tatami maker
source : edoichiba.jp. tatami...
. Edo craftsmen 江戸の職人 Shokunin .
.......................................................................
. igusa 藺 (い) rush, Binse .
Juncus effusus
. Igusamura, Igusa mura 井草村 Igusa village .
Suginami 杉並区 Suginami ward . from the first to the 5th sub-district
Kami-Igusa, Shimo-Igusa - Edo
Brocade edges for tatami mats - put to good use:
. Purses from 畳の縁 tatami heri border brocade .
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changing the tatami mats, tatami gae 畳替 (たたみがえ)
..... kaedatami 替畳(かえだたみ)
This was done as one of the preparations for the New Year. The topmost woven mat was first changed (bottom up) and when this part was worn out, a new mat was used to fix on the straw insulation core .
There is a saying in Japan
New Tatami and new wife are needed every 10 years!
女房と畳は新しいほうがいい
"A wife and tatami are best when new!"
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Worldwide use
*****************************
Things found on the way
Tatami Daruma 畳だるま
Daruma made from tatami mat pieces
from 青畳工房
http://aodatami.com/
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April 25, 2013
Kyoto temple to host tatami ‘memorial service’畳供養 Tatami Kuyoo
The Japan Tatami Industry Promotion Association will host the country’s first ever “memorial service” for the straw mats by burning them in Kyoto’s Shojokein Temple on Thursday.
The burning ritual will start at 2 p.m. and last about an hour, after which new mats will be presented to the first 20 visitors.
京都浄土宗 大本山 Shoojooke In 清浄華院 Temple Shojoke-In
source : www.tatami.in
- Temple Reference -
This temple is located near Rozan-Ji. Founded by Emperor Seiwa 清和天皇 in 860.
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HAIKU
秋近き心の寄るや四畳半
. aki chikaki kokoro no yoru ya yojoohan .
松尾芭蕉 Matsuo Basho and a four-and-a-half mat room
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青畳音して蠅のとびにけり
ao-datami oto shite hae no tobi ni keri
green tatami mat--
a fly lands
with a thump
人並に畳のうえの月見哉
hito nami ni tatami no ue no tsukimi kana
like the others
on tatami mats...
moon gazing
鳥もなき蝶も飛けり古畳
tori mo naki chô mo tobi keri furu tatami
birds singing
butterflies flitting...
old tatami mat
Issa / more Tatami haiku
Tr. David Lanoue
- - - - -
.涼しさや一畳敷もおれが家
suzushisa ya ichijoo-jiki mo ore ga ie
this coolness --
a single floor mat
is my house
Tr. Chris Drake
This hokku is from sometime in the summer of 1821 and exists only in the copy of Issa's Eighth Diary made by Issa's follower Baijin. The hokku is a bit difficult to interpret, since this is the only hokku in which Issa speaks of a single tatami floor mat, and Issa's house in his hometown burned down in 1827, so the floor plan of the house is not known. More research by historians is needed on this point, but as a general rule each room with a tatami straw mat floor in the farm houses of moderately wealthy farmers (as Issa's father was) had 4-8 tatami mats or even more. On the other hand, small storage spaces usually had no windows, and the floors were of wooden boards. In addition, the room with a hearth in the center of it tended to have a board floor, perhaps with thin straw mats on the boards. Issa's father's house also had a small stable in or near it, since his father not only farmed but rented out pack horses. Perhaps Gabi can enlighten us on the typical use of tatami floor mats in farm houses.
In any case, I take Issa to be writing about his psychological and spiritual condition living in the half of his father's house that he inherited. The summer of 1821 was a difficult time for Issa and his wife Kiku, since in the fourth lunar month (May) she came down with a bad case of gout. When she did, Issa rushed home from a student's house and nursed her for about four months until the symptoms disappeared. Although Issa didn't keep a detailed diary during this time, it is very likely that Kiku's mother and probably another woman to help her came to Issa's house and also helped nurse Kiku. In addition, since Issa couldn't travel, many visitors came to see him, and he must have been extremely busy doing all sorts of jobs.
In this situation, with Kiku lying sick on a mattress all day, the rooms of Issa's house must have been filled with people and things, with little space left for just sitting and enjoying cool breezes. Perhaps during this time Issa had only a single mat's space to himself for his writing and for cooling off and sleeping. Usually a single mat -- just large enough for a single person to sleep on -- would seem cramped, but now Issa finds it more than enough. It seems as big as a whole house to him now. His mind is on helping his wife recover and, probably, on working harmoniously with his mother-in-law, and he no doubt fans his wife often on hot days. The size of his personal space just doesn't seem as important as it usually does. The fact that he is in his own house with his wife and some of her family may cool him psychologically just as much the evening breezes do.
Chris Drake
. Kobayashi Issa 小林一茶 Issa in Edo .
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The change of servants
Her tears
Splash on the tatami
Taiga / In The Moonlight a Worm
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草の戸や畳かへたる夏祓
kusa no to ya tatami kaetaru natsu harae
reed door -
tatami mats changed for the
summer purification
(tr. Gabi Greve)
Tan Taigi 炭 太祇 たん・たいぎ (1738-1791)
*****************************
Related words
***** Light seating mat, goza 茣蓙
mats with pictures, e goza 絵茣蓙(えござ
e mushiro 絵筵(えむしろ)
patterned mats, aya mushiro 綾筵(あやむしろ)
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***** Seating mats, portable, mushiro 筵
kigo for the new year
kake mushiro 掛筵 (かけむしろ)
new mat, aramushiro 新筵(あらむしろ)
toshigomo 年薦(としごも)
"lucky mat", fuku mushiro福筵(ふくむしろ)
kigo for all summer
mat for sleeping, negoza 寝茣蓙 (ねござ )
... ne mushiro 寝筵(ねむしろ)
rattan mat, too mushiro 籐筵 (とうむしろ ,tomushiro とむしろ )
reed mat, gama mushiro 蒲筵 がまむしろ
..... gama goza 蒲茣蓙(がまござ)
gama/kama is a reed that grows near lakes and rivers.
.......................................................................
takamushiro 簟 (たかむしろ) mat from woven bamboo
amushiro, ten 簟 (not: take mushiro)
It is a mat woven with bamboo stripes and quite cool to lie on.
窓形に昼寝の台や簟
madonari ni hirune no dai ya takamushiro
by the window
on a high sleeping platform -
a bamboo mat
Tr. Gabi Greve
Written in summer of 1693 元禄6年夏.
Basho is maybe thinking of the Chinese poet Tao Yuanming 陶淵明 Too Enmei (365 - 427), who led a poor but poetically rich life. In the hot humid summer of Japan, it was very important to find a cool place to sleep in summer.
. Matsuo Basho 松尾芭蕉 - Archives of the WKD .
. WKD : Tao Yuanming 陶淵明 .
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六月の女すわれる荒莚
rokugatsu no onna suwareru ara mushiro
a woman in june
sits on a worn-out
reed mat
Ishida Hakyoo 石田波郷
He wrote this haiku just after the war, when this young woman sat there on an old mat, in the middle of all destruction, yet still emanating the feeling of the energy of the lush greenery of June.
This meaning would be lost if the haiku had a cut after line one, like
rokugatsu YA.
Tr. Gabi Greve
Ishida Hakyo (Ishida Hakyoo) (1913-1969)
.......................................................................
***** takamushiro nagori 簟名残 (たかむしろなごり) remembering the bamboo mat
kigo for autumn
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***** komodatami こもだたみ (こもだたみ 菰畳/薦畳)
They are woven from Makomo reed.
makomo 真菰 wild rice; water oats.
They were already used in the Heian period.
春立や菰もかぶらず五十年
haru tatsu ya komo mo kaburazu go juunen
spring begins--
no reed mat over my head
fifty years now
Kobayashi Issa
Komo is reed matting or a rush mat.
In traditional Japan, a person's age increased by one year at the beginning of every new spring. Now Issa is fifty.
When I first read this haiku, I didn't grasp what Issa meant by having no "reed mat" (komo) over his head. Shinji Ogawa explains that this is an idiom for "never being a beggar."
He translates, "spring begins/ without being a beggar/ fifty years."
Issa's humor lies in the fact that he seems to be bragging about so little: that he has managed to stay at least one step above street beggars crouching under their mats when it rains.
Tr. David Lanoue
observance kigo for early autumn
makomo mushiro 真菰筵(まこもむしろ) mat made from Makomo
for the Bon-shelf
. Bon Festival, O-Bon, Obon お盆 .
komo 薦 komo straw mat
薦を着て誰人います花の春
komo o kite tarebito imasu hana no haru
the man wearing
a straw mat, who is he?
blossoms of spring
Tr. Barnhill
Written on the New Year's day of 1690 元禄3年元日, Basho age 47. Basho stayed with a haikai at Zeze after finishing his trip to "Oku no Hosomichi".
This refers to the spring in "flower capital" of Kyoto. A begger might wear a straw mat, but so might be a sage or sacred hermit. A straw mat was the winter cover for the poorest of beggars (kojiki, kosshiki こつじき / 乞食) at that time.
This was a time when he started to experiment with the style of karumi 軽み lightness.
. Matsuo Basho 松尾芭蕉 - Archives of the WKD .
. WKD : konjiki, kojiki, kotsujiki 乞食 beggar, Bettelmönch .
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. Tatamicho, Tatamichō, Tatamimachi 畳町
Tatami district in Edo .
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Changing tatami floor mats (tatami gae)
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: Mid-winter
***** Category: Humanity
*****************************
Explanation
Woven mats of rice straw traditionally used to cover floors in Japan.
Tatami (畳 )(originally meaning "folded and piled, tatamu ") mats are a traditional Japanese flooring. Made of woven straw, and traditionally packed with rice straw (though nowadays sometimes with styrofoam), tatami are made in individual mats of uniform size and shape, bordered by brocade or plain green cloth.
Tatami were originally a luxury item for the wealthy at a time when lower classes had mat-covered dirt floors. Tatami were gradually popularized and finally reached the homes of commoners towards the end of the 17th century.
There are various rules concerning the number and layout of tatami mats; an inauspicious layout is said to bring bad fortune. In homes, the mats must not be laid in a grid pattern, and in any layout there is never a point where the corners of three or four mats intersect.
In Japan, the size of a room is typically measured by the number of tatami mats (畳 -jō, joo, jou). The traditional dimensions of the mats were fixed at 90 cm by 180 cm (1.62 square meters) by 5 cm (35.5 in by 71 in by 2 in).
Half mats, 90 cm by 90 cm (35.5 in by 35.5 in) are also made. Shops were traditionally designed to be 5½ mats (8.91m²), and tea rooms and tea houses are frequently 4½ mats (7.29m²). Because the size is fixed, rooms in traditional Japanese construction measure in multiples of 90 cm. Mats from Kyoto (Kyo-tatami, Kyoo datami) and other parts of western Japan are slightly larger than those from Tokyo and eastern Japan at 95.5 cm by 191 cm (1.82m²; 37.6 in by 75.2 in).
Edges for tatamis come in many patterns for different occasions.
Tatami is made with a rush plant, igusa.
Igusa is a perennial plant of the family of igusa. Igusa smells good. It has a fresh, grassy smell. In English, they are called rushes. Igusa blooms from May through June. The plant grows up to a length of 100 centimeters or less. They grow in marshes where sunshine is good. In Japan, there are 30 kinds of igusa growing in many different areas.
Tatami is made from natural igusa that must be flexible from the root to the tip, and the thickness and the color varies slightly. About 4000 to 7000 igusa are used for the tatami. Generally the best tatami uses more and longer igusa rushes.
There are many benefits in using igusa such as air purification, heat insulation, elasticity, cooling (especially in hot summer seasons), eco-friendly and sound absorbing qualities. Igusa tatami is also smooth to the touch, so it is comfortable for babies and young children. Most Japanese like tatami. Many homes have at least one tatami room.
© More in the WIKIPEDIA !
In Edo, the 伊阿弥 / 藺阿弥 Iami family was appointed by Tokugawa Ieyasu.
The family business dated back to the Muromachi period.
藺阿弥 also grew igusa rush material. The family name Iami was given by 織田信長 Oda Nobunaga.
The tatami maker family later served under Toyotomi Hideyoshi.
- reference source : tatami-tatami.cocolog-nifty... -
. Tatamicho, Tatamichō, Tatamimachi 畳町
Tatami district in Edo .
tatamiya 畳屋 - 畳職人 tatami maker
source : edoichiba.jp. tatami...
. Edo craftsmen 江戸の職人 Shokunin .
.......................................................................
. igusa 藺 (い) rush, Binse .
Juncus effusus
. Igusamura, Igusa mura 井草村 Igusa village .
Suginami 杉並区 Suginami ward . from the first to the 5th sub-district
Kami-Igusa, Shimo-Igusa - Edo
Brocade edges for tatami mats - put to good use:
. Purses from 畳の縁 tatami heri border brocade .
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
changing the tatami mats, tatami gae 畳替 (たたみがえ)
..... kaedatami 替畳(かえだたみ)
This was done as one of the preparations for the New Year. The topmost woven mat was first changed (bottom up) and when this part was worn out, a new mat was used to fix on the straw insulation core .
There is a saying in Japan
New Tatami and new wife are needed every 10 years!
女房と畳は新しいほうがいい
"A wife and tatami are best when new!"
*****************************
Worldwide use
*****************************
Things found on the way
Tatami Daruma 畳だるま
Daruma made from tatami mat pieces
from 青畳工房
http://aodatami.com/
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
April 25, 2013
Kyoto temple to host tatami ‘memorial service’畳供養 Tatami Kuyoo
The Japan Tatami Industry Promotion Association will host the country’s first ever “memorial service” for the straw mats by burning them in Kyoto’s Shojokein Temple on Thursday.
The burning ritual will start at 2 p.m. and last about an hour, after which new mats will be presented to the first 20 visitors.
京都浄土宗 大本山 Shoojooke In 清浄華院 Temple Shojoke-In
source : www.tatami.in
- Temple Reference -
This temple is located near Rozan-Ji. Founded by Emperor Seiwa 清和天皇 in 860.
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HAIKU
秋近き心の寄るや四畳半
. aki chikaki kokoro no yoru ya yojoohan .
松尾芭蕉 Matsuo Basho and a four-and-a-half mat room
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青畳音して蠅のとびにけり
ao-datami oto shite hae no tobi ni keri
green tatami mat--
a fly lands
with a thump
人並に畳のうえの月見哉
hito nami ni tatami no ue no tsukimi kana
like the others
on tatami mats...
moon gazing
鳥もなき蝶も飛けり古畳
tori mo naki chô mo tobi keri furu tatami
birds singing
butterflies flitting...
old tatami mat
Issa / more Tatami haiku
Tr. David Lanoue
- - - - -
.涼しさや一畳敷もおれが家
suzushisa ya ichijoo-jiki mo ore ga ie
this coolness --
a single floor mat
is my house
Tr. Chris Drake
This hokku is from sometime in the summer of 1821 and exists only in the copy of Issa's Eighth Diary made by Issa's follower Baijin. The hokku is a bit difficult to interpret, since this is the only hokku in which Issa speaks of a single tatami floor mat, and Issa's house in his hometown burned down in 1827, so the floor plan of the house is not known. More research by historians is needed on this point, but as a general rule each room with a tatami straw mat floor in the farm houses of moderately wealthy farmers (as Issa's father was) had 4-8 tatami mats or even more. On the other hand, small storage spaces usually had no windows, and the floors were of wooden boards. In addition, the room with a hearth in the center of it tended to have a board floor, perhaps with thin straw mats on the boards. Issa's father's house also had a small stable in or near it, since his father not only farmed but rented out pack horses. Perhaps Gabi can enlighten us on the typical use of tatami floor mats in farm houses.
In any case, I take Issa to be writing about his psychological and spiritual condition living in the half of his father's house that he inherited. The summer of 1821 was a difficult time for Issa and his wife Kiku, since in the fourth lunar month (May) she came down with a bad case of gout. When she did, Issa rushed home from a student's house and nursed her for about four months until the symptoms disappeared. Although Issa didn't keep a detailed diary during this time, it is very likely that Kiku's mother and probably another woman to help her came to Issa's house and also helped nurse Kiku. In addition, since Issa couldn't travel, many visitors came to see him, and he must have been extremely busy doing all sorts of jobs.
In this situation, with Kiku lying sick on a mattress all day, the rooms of Issa's house must have been filled with people and things, with little space left for just sitting and enjoying cool breezes. Perhaps during this time Issa had only a single mat's space to himself for his writing and for cooling off and sleeping. Usually a single mat -- just large enough for a single person to sleep on -- would seem cramped, but now Issa finds it more than enough. It seems as big as a whole house to him now. His mind is on helping his wife recover and, probably, on working harmoniously with his mother-in-law, and he no doubt fans his wife often on hot days. The size of his personal space just doesn't seem as important as it usually does. The fact that he is in his own house with his wife and some of her family may cool him psychologically just as much the evening breezes do.
Chris Drake
. Kobayashi Issa 小林一茶 Issa in Edo .
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
The change of servants
Her tears
Splash on the tatami
Taiga / In The Moonlight a Worm
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
草の戸や畳かへたる夏祓
kusa no to ya tatami kaetaru natsu harae
reed door -
tatami mats changed for the
summer purification
(tr. Gabi Greve)
Tan Taigi 炭 太祇 たん・たいぎ (1738-1791)
*****************************
Related words
***** Light seating mat, goza 茣蓙
mats with pictures, e goza 絵茣蓙(えござ
e mushiro 絵筵(えむしろ)
patterned mats, aya mushiro 綾筵(あやむしろ)
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
***** Seating mats, portable, mushiro 筵
kigo for the new year
kake mushiro 掛筵 (かけむしろ)
new mat, aramushiro 新筵(あらむしろ)
toshigomo 年薦(としごも)
"lucky mat", fuku mushiro福筵(ふくむしろ)
kigo for all summer
mat for sleeping, negoza 寝茣蓙 (ねござ )
... ne mushiro 寝筵(ねむしろ)
rattan mat, too mushiro 籐筵 (とうむしろ ,tomushiro とむしろ )
reed mat, gama mushiro 蒲筵 がまむしろ
..... gama goza 蒲茣蓙(がまござ)
gama/kama is a reed that grows near lakes and rivers.
.......................................................................
takamushiro 簟 (たかむしろ) mat from woven bamboo
amushiro, ten 簟 (not: take mushiro)
It is a mat woven with bamboo stripes and quite cool to lie on.
窓形に昼寝の台や簟
madonari ni hirune no dai ya takamushiro
by the window
on a high sleeping platform -
a bamboo mat
Tr. Gabi Greve
Written in summer of 1693 元禄6年夏.
Basho is maybe thinking of the Chinese poet Tao Yuanming 陶淵明 Too Enmei (365 - 427), who led a poor but poetically rich life. In the hot humid summer of Japan, it was very important to find a cool place to sleep in summer.
. Matsuo Basho 松尾芭蕉 - Archives of the WKD .
. WKD : Tao Yuanming 陶淵明 .
.......................................................................
六月の女すわれる荒莚
rokugatsu no onna suwareru ara mushiro
a woman in june
sits on a worn-out
reed mat
Ishida Hakyoo 石田波郷
He wrote this haiku just after the war, when this young woman sat there on an old mat, in the middle of all destruction, yet still emanating the feeling of the energy of the lush greenery of June.
This meaning would be lost if the haiku had a cut after line one, like
rokugatsu YA.
Tr. Gabi Greve
Ishida Hakyo (Ishida Hakyoo) (1913-1969)
.......................................................................
***** takamushiro nagori 簟名残 (たかむしろなごり) remembering the bamboo mat
kigo for autumn
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
***** komodatami こもだたみ (こもだたみ 菰畳/薦畳)
They are woven from Makomo reed.
makomo 真菰 wild rice; water oats.
They were already used in the Heian period.
春立や菰もかぶらず五十年
haru tatsu ya komo mo kaburazu go juunen
spring begins--
no reed mat over my head
fifty years now
Kobayashi Issa
Komo is reed matting or a rush mat.
In traditional Japan, a person's age increased by one year at the beginning of every new spring. Now Issa is fifty.
When I first read this haiku, I didn't grasp what Issa meant by having no "reed mat" (komo) over his head. Shinji Ogawa explains that this is an idiom for "never being a beggar."
He translates, "spring begins/ without being a beggar/ fifty years."
Issa's humor lies in the fact that he seems to be bragging about so little: that he has managed to stay at least one step above street beggars crouching under their mats when it rains.
Tr. David Lanoue
observance kigo for early autumn
makomo mushiro 真菰筵(まこもむしろ) mat made from Makomo
for the Bon-shelf
. Bon Festival, O-Bon, Obon お盆 .
komo 薦 komo straw mat
薦を着て誰人います花の春
komo o kite tarebito imasu hana no haru
the man wearing
a straw mat, who is he?
blossoms of spring
Tr. Barnhill
Written on the New Year's day of 1690 元禄3年元日, Basho age 47. Basho stayed with a haikai at Zeze after finishing his trip to "Oku no Hosomichi".
This refers to the spring in "flower capital" of Kyoto. A begger might wear a straw mat, but so might be a sage or sacred hermit. A straw mat was the winter cover for the poorest of beggars (kojiki, kosshiki こつじき / 乞食) at that time.
This was a time when he started to experiment with the style of karumi 軽み lightness.
. Matsuo Basho 松尾芭蕉 - Archives of the WKD .
. WKD : konjiki, kojiki, kotsujiki 乞食 beggar, Bettelmönch .
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11/01/2007
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Oden, O-Den hodgepodge おでん 御田
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: All Winter
***** Category: Humanity
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Explanation
A Japanese hodgepodge dish or kind of stew, containing all kinds of ingredients cooked in a special broth of soy sauce, sugar, sake, etc.
The ingredients are simmered in an earthen pot, the sound of the broth is referred to as gutsugutsu and felt rather pleasant.
Eating oden is a relaxing family event or a sad lone dinner at one of the many food stalls around each station of Japan.
Spending a long winter night with friends, sipping ricewine, complaining about life and munching bits and pieces of oden is a fond winter pastime.
simmering oden
nikomi oden 煮込みおでん(にこみおでん)
simmering it "Kanto style", kantoodaki 関東煮(かんとうだき)
preferred in the area around Tokyo and the Kanto plain
oden ingredients, oden dane おでん種(おでんだね)
simmering oden, oden niru おでん煮る
oden stall, oden store, odenya おでん屋(おでんや)
Matsuo Basho himself was fond of konyaku oden (gelatinous food made from devil's-tongue starch).
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Quote from the Japan Times
Oden : Japanese for 'soul food'
By ROBBIE SWINNERTON
For some this is soul food, warming and comforting; for others it is the rank smell of culture shock. Whichever side of the great divide you stand, though, one thing is certain: Your local convenience store will never deliver the authentic taste of any food. For that, you need to go to the source, to a long-established specialist.
Tradition runs strong in Senzoku, on the northern fringe of Asakusa, and nowhere is this more evident than at Otafuku. This family operation, currently run by the fourth and fifth generations of the Funadaiku family, has been serving its specialty here since 1916.
There is a small dining room at the back with tatami mats and low tables. But the seats of choice for the predominantly local clientele (you are way off the tourist trail here) are the low-slung chairs at the counter, from where they observe the proceedings, chat with the two Funadaiku brothers, and order their meals, one piece at a time, much as you would at a sushi shop.
Not surprisingly, Otafuku prepares its oden in the robust Kanto style, seasoned with dark shoyu (soy sauce). The ingredients — predominantly of seafood, tofu or vegetable origin — are gently simmered for a couple of hours until they are infused with the rich, savory essence of that broth. What is less usual is the wide variety of different items to choose from.
All the usual suspects are present and correct: whole, hard-boiled eggs; slabs of firm tofu; thick rounds of daikon radish; satsuma-age (deep-fried fish paste); and dark, rubbery konnyaku (devil's tongue root jelly), all texture and minimal flavor. There are more exotic offerings too: uzura no tamago (skewered quail eggs); iidako (miniature octopuses); and even whale tongue and blubber.
Our perennial favorites are the tsumire, flavorful balls of ground sardine, and the kyabetsu maki, cabbage leaf stuffed with finely ground beef. Both of these have plenty of inherent flavor that does not get lost in the long simmering process. Everything does start to taste a bit repetitive after a while; that is why each serving comes with a powerful dab of fiery yellow mustard to cauterize any staleness from your palate and sinuses.
Oden is by definition snacking food, in classic izakaya style. It's there to accompany the sake — and here you won't go wrong with the resinous taruzake, sake poured straight from the wooden cask on the counter. Chilled, it is served in wooden masu box cups, with a little salt on the side; to appreciate its full perfume, it is better warmed (ask for okan).
Here are some of our favorites from Kyoto : kyo-ganmo — small golden balls of deep-fried tofu mashed with flecks of carrot and seaweed, with a delicate quail's egg at their center; daikon — always the benchmark of any oden shop, here the vegetable retains its natural flavor, texture and color, and is among the best you will find; iwashi tsumire — small, dark, intensely flavored balls of minced sardine; tori supaisu tsukune — balls of ground chicken meat, slightly crunchy in texture like the tsukune served at yakitori shops, but here spiked with piquant black pepper; satsukuri-san — sweet-potato puree formed into a soft disk shape, with a piece of chestnut in the center; and kabomaru-san — an excellent autumn special, prepared from pureed kabocha pumpkin studded with raisins to give an extra dimension of natural sweetness.
Although each serving is accompanied by the standard dash of karashi mustard, we find we leave it untouched, as we don't want to override the natural flavors of the oden.
Read the full article here
from the Japan Times, Nov. 2, 2007
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Worldwide use
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Things found on the way
. Shizuoka Oden Yokocho 静岡 おでん横丁 .
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WASHOKU
In Japan, the choice of what to serve for a meal, and how to present it, is intimately linked to nature and embellished by cultural nuance. Each month in the Japanese kitchen, and at table, has a distinct seasonal identity, complete with its own legends and festivals, and the motifs and color schemes associated with them.
Modern-day oden traces its roots back to the Muromachi Period (1336-1573) and a dish called DENGAKU in which skewered tofu, slathered with a sweet and spicy miso paste, was broiled.
Read more and a few recipies HERE
© www.tasteofculture.com
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HAIKU
飲みすぎのおでん野郎に黄のからし
nomisugi no oden yaroo ni ki no karashi
for the drunk
with too much oden -
yellow mustard
© 草若葉
Tr. Gabi Greve
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浮き沈みある世想いておでん煮る
uki shizumi aru yo omoide oden niru
thinking about
the ups and downs of life -
I simmer oden
© haiku tabi nitijou
Tr. Gabi Greve
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ことごとく意見の合はぬおでん鍋
kotogotoku iken no awanu oden nabe
really,
our opinions are so different -
oden pot
Saika Junko 雑賀純子
I imagine an old couple, sitting in comfort with the oden pot, nibbling and complaining anyway, just like in the next haiku.
ぐつぐつとおでんぐつぐつぐつと愚痴
gutsugutsu to oden gutsugutsu gutto guchi
gutsugutsu
oden simmering gutsugutsu ...
and we complain heartily
Ebiko Raiji 蛯子雷児
hokui40 collection
Tr. Gabi Greve
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Related words
***** Japanese Food to keep you warm in Winter
***** Food from Japan (washoku)
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Oden, O-Den hodgepodge おでん 御田
***** Location: Japan
***** Season: All Winter
***** Category: Humanity
*****************************
Explanation
A Japanese hodgepodge dish or kind of stew, containing all kinds of ingredients cooked in a special broth of soy sauce, sugar, sake, etc.
The ingredients are simmered in an earthen pot, the sound of the broth is referred to as gutsugutsu and felt rather pleasant.
Eating oden is a relaxing family event or a sad lone dinner at one of the many food stalls around each station of Japan.
Spending a long winter night with friends, sipping ricewine, complaining about life and munching bits and pieces of oden is a fond winter pastime.
simmering oden
nikomi oden 煮込みおでん(にこみおでん)
simmering it "Kanto style", kantoodaki 関東煮(かんとうだき)
preferred in the area around Tokyo and the Kanto plain
oden ingredients, oden dane おでん種(おでんだね)
simmering oden, oden niru おでん煮る
oden stall, oden store, odenya おでん屋(おでんや)
Matsuo Basho himself was fond of konyaku oden (gelatinous food made from devil's-tongue starch).
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Quote from the Japan Times
Oden : Japanese for 'soul food'
By ROBBIE SWINNERTON
For some this is soul food, warming and comforting; for others it is the rank smell of culture shock. Whichever side of the great divide you stand, though, one thing is certain: Your local convenience store will never deliver the authentic taste of any food. For that, you need to go to the source, to a long-established specialist.
Tradition runs strong in Senzoku, on the northern fringe of Asakusa, and nowhere is this more evident than at Otafuku. This family operation, currently run by the fourth and fifth generations of the Funadaiku family, has been serving its specialty here since 1916.
There is a small dining room at the back with tatami mats and low tables. But the seats of choice for the predominantly local clientele (you are way off the tourist trail here) are the low-slung chairs at the counter, from where they observe the proceedings, chat with the two Funadaiku brothers, and order their meals, one piece at a time, much as you would at a sushi shop.
Not surprisingly, Otafuku prepares its oden in the robust Kanto style, seasoned with dark shoyu (soy sauce). The ingredients — predominantly of seafood, tofu or vegetable origin — are gently simmered for a couple of hours until they are infused with the rich, savory essence of that broth. What is less usual is the wide variety of different items to choose from.
All the usual suspects are present and correct: whole, hard-boiled eggs; slabs of firm tofu; thick rounds of daikon radish; satsuma-age (deep-fried fish paste); and dark, rubbery konnyaku (devil's tongue root jelly), all texture and minimal flavor. There are more exotic offerings too: uzura no tamago (skewered quail eggs); iidako (miniature octopuses); and even whale tongue and blubber.
Our perennial favorites are the tsumire, flavorful balls of ground sardine, and the kyabetsu maki, cabbage leaf stuffed with finely ground beef. Both of these have plenty of inherent flavor that does not get lost in the long simmering process. Everything does start to taste a bit repetitive after a while; that is why each serving comes with a powerful dab of fiery yellow mustard to cauterize any staleness from your palate and sinuses.
Oden is by definition snacking food, in classic izakaya style. It's there to accompany the sake — and here you won't go wrong with the resinous taruzake, sake poured straight from the wooden cask on the counter. Chilled, it is served in wooden masu box cups, with a little salt on the side; to appreciate its full perfume, it is better warmed (ask for okan).
Here are some of our favorites from Kyoto : kyo-ganmo — small golden balls of deep-fried tofu mashed with flecks of carrot and seaweed, with a delicate quail's egg at their center; daikon — always the benchmark of any oden shop, here the vegetable retains its natural flavor, texture and color, and is among the best you will find; iwashi tsumire — small, dark, intensely flavored balls of minced sardine; tori supaisu tsukune — balls of ground chicken meat, slightly crunchy in texture like the tsukune served at yakitori shops, but here spiked with piquant black pepper; satsukuri-san — sweet-potato puree formed into a soft disk shape, with a piece of chestnut in the center; and kabomaru-san — an excellent autumn special, prepared from pureed kabocha pumpkin studded with raisins to give an extra dimension of natural sweetness.
Although each serving is accompanied by the standard dash of karashi mustard, we find we leave it untouched, as we don't want to override the natural flavors of the oden.
Read the full article here
from the Japan Times, Nov. 2, 2007
............................................
*****************************
Worldwide use
*****************************
Things found on the way
. Shizuoka Oden Yokocho 静岡 おでん横丁 .
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
WASHOKU
In Japan, the choice of what to serve for a meal, and how to present it, is intimately linked to nature and embellished by cultural nuance. Each month in the Japanese kitchen, and at table, has a distinct seasonal identity, complete with its own legends and festivals, and the motifs and color schemes associated with them.
Modern-day oden traces its roots back to the Muromachi Period (1336-1573) and a dish called DENGAKU in which skewered tofu, slathered with a sweet and spicy miso paste, was broiled.
Read more and a few recipies HERE
© www.tasteofculture.com
*****************************
HAIKU
飲みすぎのおでん野郎に黄のからし
nomisugi no oden yaroo ni ki no karashi
for the drunk
with too much oden -
yellow mustard
© 草若葉
Tr. Gabi Greve
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
浮き沈みある世想いておでん煮る
uki shizumi aru yo omoide oden niru
thinking about
the ups and downs of life -
I simmer oden
© haiku tabi nitijou
Tr. Gabi Greve
:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
ことごとく意見の合はぬおでん鍋
kotogotoku iken no awanu oden nabe
really,
our opinions are so different -
oden pot
Saika Junko 雑賀純子
I imagine an old couple, sitting in comfort with the oden pot, nibbling and complaining anyway, just like in the next haiku.
ぐつぐつとおでんぐつぐつぐつと愚痴
gutsugutsu to oden gutsugutsu gutto guchi
gutsugutsu
oden simmering gutsugutsu ...
and we complain heartily
Ebiko Raiji 蛯子雷児
hokui40 collection
Tr. Gabi Greve
*****************************
Related words
***** Japanese Food to keep you warm in Winter
***** Food from Japan (washoku)
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